[note: Yes, this decision has been taken: the SPL board decided not to pursue this re-branding exercise, thankfully. A friend thought these thoughts were worth sharing though, so enjoy, you brave branding warriors you.]
Seattle Public Library is running a rebranding exercise. It’s getting some notice. Most folks think that the ephemeral conversation around brands, their affect and effect, sounds like airy mumbo jumbo.
And they’re right. It often is. Branding work is grasping at the heavens trying to catch a star, so it can look kind of silly. It’s the liberal arts version of ‘making sausage.’
Branding is hard because it involves two opposite types of work: Intense, blue sky brainstorming, where the group’s brains are stretched too and from to wring out every possible association to get all the candidates on the table. And then the painstaking work of editing, in an increasingly granular fashion, until you’re counting syllables, measuring phonemes, and parsing every fragment of structure at an atomic language level.
But its important. It’s inarguable that a hefty part of Apple, Nike, Coke and many other companies market value, enduring sales, pricing power are because of the strength of their brand, and the ephemeral feelings those brands generate that just happen to do a wonderful job unlocking wallets.
To their credit, SPL is conducting a survey asking for feedback on the new proposed name, branding statement and a few logos. (The survey expired October 11th.)
I thought I’d post the thoughts I shared with them:
First comments on their proposed new branding statement, which follows:
“The Library provides access to knowledge, experiences and learning for all. We preserve and create opportunities for the people of Seattle who make it such a dynamic and desirable place to live. When we’re empowered as individuals, we become stronger together.”
Overview: Too many words, and word choices that are, at best, an odd fit with what people and communities expect from a library.
“Access to” is unnecessary. “Provides” carries the water, and the sentence scans better without it.
How do you “preserve” an opportunity? Create I understand, and that has value. A preserved opportunity has no value until it’s engaged — or created for the patron. You also store books, but that’s not the value you provide — its the *use* of the books that provides value.
Dynamic and desirable. Don’t flatter us. Just say “the people of Seattle”. We know who, and what, we are.
Avoid “Empowered”. It’s lazy, corporate, bland and overused.
Is being “stronger together” what anyone is looking for from a library? Is “stronger” a primary motivation for folks to use the library? Is use of the library something that individuals think they are doing together?
I don’t engage with the community aspect. I understand that the goal is to communicate the community value of the library , but I suspect most folks are glad its there for themselves and for others, but our uses for the library are likely so diverse that the sense that it meets an overall community need is distant. The library interaction is not — unlike sports, or arts events — a group endeavor: It’s solitary, personal, introspective and quiet. I’m not sure that its even a “community” experience. Perhaps you’re confusing the desired *effect* you aspire the Library to have with the experience that individuals (and individuals, not groups, are your patrons) have with the library.
I’m a big fan of ending with triplets. They have a natural, human, highly menomnic rythem , “…making our community more enriched, informed and enlightened.”
How about this:
“The Seattle Public Library provides knowledge, experiences and learning for all. We help Seattle become more informed, enriched and enlightened.”
Sentence one says what the SPL does. Sentence two is the benefit statement.
In addition to the branding statement, there are logos. My thoughts below:
Logo one:

Immediate associations are “unstable” and “random”. Orange is not a color I associate with either Seattle or libraries.
Odd that a new name that is emphasizing multiple buildings trades so heavily on SPL’s most famous building. There is a dissonance between the plural new name and the very singular reference implied by the image.
Should be “library”, not libraries. The brand is the concept of a library, not the fact that you have many locations. Because of SPL’s excellent online reservations and pickup at any location, I feel like I have access to the library anywhere. And many of your libraries (Wallingford, for example) are too small and under resourced to really do justice to the term “library”. Glad its there, but its as much of a hub distribution point as a “library”.
Logo Two:
Hello Century 21! Straight out of the worlds fair. Very 1962. I have a wall clock with this design. Ok, I get that you’re trying to communicate “many elements” to sync with the transition from singular to plural in the name and the sense of community you want to emphasize, but, no. Missing how this supports the “preserve”, “Create”, “Stronger” elements of the branding statement. In fairness, “opportunity” rings true with this image ( but opportunity isn’t a great word to brand a library system).
More variety than just a few shades of one color would emphasize the diversity of the community SPL serves. You can include green w/o it being a Seahawks promotion, I’m sure.
Logo Three

And whaddya know? Green on the very next sample!
See previous comments on the shape. New immediate reactions: Someone is trussed in a sheet and is fighting to get out. A Cubist ice sculpture is about to fall. Isn’t this a biotech logo? And if so, the company probably doesn’t need it anymore and you can pick it up for a song.
Reinforcing the lack of stability motif, it seems to be balanced on a single, uncentered point. The brain tends to look graphics like this and imagine them having a physical presence, and one has a hard time imagining this as a stable, free-standing object — kind of the opposite of what a revered, practically ancient public institution wants to project for itself.
The colors are an improvement, both the range and the palette.
This doesn’t communicate “Stronger together”. That apparent random unstableness counterdiects the notion of “stronger” and its potential imminent demise makes the “together” promise temporary.
Final Thoughts:
I get the point. You want to emphasize the broad community benefit the library delivers. I appreciate that you’re putting some effort into raising the profile and the awareness of the value that the (very excellent!) SPL brings to Seattle. It’s a worthy and important exercise.
But this *particular* branding approach does not help you reach that goal. Instead of diffusing the institution by pluralizing (“libraries”) it to represent a collection of buildings (yeah, I know, in *communities* across the city), communicate that the library is one thing to all the people of Seattle. And work hard on that mission statement so it incorporates the broad set of benefits to a broad set of communities, and is flexible to grow over time.
A place for knowledge, reflection and enrichment.
I would also think carefully about some of the other key words in your branding statement. A magic and value of a library is as much a concept (making ideas widely available to all) as it is a “thing”. This branding feels like it emphasizes the thing more than the concept. See my previous comments on “stronger”, “together”, “preserve” “empower”.
I’ve done branding. I know its value and how hard it is to get right. I’ve worked with the firm you’ve engaged, who are top notch. These comments are meant to be constructive, and I hope you’ll take them as such.